originalkitten on DeviantArthttps://www.deviantart.com/originalkitten/art/Look-Me-in-the-Eyes-140827767originalkitten

Deviation Actions

originalkitten's avatar

Look Me in the Eyes

Published:
646 Views

Description

No excuses, I won't apologize
Or justify your lies
Come find me, tell them to me
Look me in the eyes
©Robbie Williams - Misunderstood

Ty for looking. Hair is Helena by swam/zachrael2002

I was goin for an old photo effect here.
Image size
522x680px 45.91 KB
© 2009 - 2024 originalkitten
Comments6
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
dd45's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

since you said you're trying for the "old photo" look i'm writing this critique accordingly. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />
as far as looking like an old photo, you almost nailed it perfectly! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />
great composition for an intense emotive portrait. her expression shows the anger, hurt, and confusion described in the song. the closeness and direct eye contact contribute greatly to this feel.
the skin is perfect; the colors/shading, texture, and "shine" is spot on for a photo of a live person.
hair is pretty good (maybe a little more jitter or a dual brush to add a little more sheen to individual hairs), and the eyes are a little too white (they show as more grey in old photos.)
overall a great image, for 3D or photo. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />